25.【2018年山东省临沂】亲爱的同学,在你三年的初中生活中, 总会与有些同学成为朋友。请以 “My Best Friend and I” 为题, 根据以下要求与提示, 用英语写一篇短文。
要求:
1. 如果你最好的朋友是女生,请用名字Mary; 如果是男生, 请用Jeff。短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
2. 不少于60词。
提示:
I. Who is your best friend?
2. How long have you been friends? And how did you become friends?
3. How are you the same as and different from your best friend? And what do you like about him / her?
My Best Friend and I
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【答案】My Best Friend and I
We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends Jeff. We’ve been friends for three years. Three years ago, I was a new student in our class. I felt very lonely. My English was very poor. Jeff often helped me learn English. With his help, I made much progress in English. So we became friends. Though we are both tall and thin, we are different. Jeff is more outgoing than me and he is good at playing soccer. But I’m quieter than him. I’m good at playing basketball. We often help each other. He is very kind and friendly. So we get on well with each other.
I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.
【解析】
【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如so many good friends，graduate from school，feel very lonely，help sb. do sth.，in English，tall and thin，be good at，each other，get on well with，last forever等。而Though we are both tall and thin, we are different./ I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
要求:
1. 如果你最好的朋友是女生,请用名字Mary; 如果是男生, 请用Jeff。短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。
2. 不少于60词。
提示:
I. Who is your best friend?
2. How long have you been friends? And how did you become friends?
3. How are you the same as and different from your best friend? And what do you like about him / her?
My Best Friend and I
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
【答案】My Best Friend and I
We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends Jeff. We’ve been friends for three years. Three years ago, I was a new student in our class. I felt very lonely. My English was very poor. Jeff often helped me learn English. With his help, I made much progress in English. So we became friends. Though we are both tall and thin, we are different. Jeff is more outgoing than me and he is good at playing soccer. But I’m quieter than him. I’m good at playing basketball. We often help each other. He is very kind and friendly. So we get on well with each other.
I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.
【解析】
【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如so many good friends，graduate from school，feel very lonely，help sb. do sth.，in English，tall and thin，be good at，each other，get on well with，last forever等。而Though we are both tall and thin, we are different./ I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
