56.“人间烟火味,最抚凡人心”,2020年初,由于新冠肺炎的爆发,很多人都不得不待在家里,而不能外出打工谋生。

【2020•湖北省十堰市】
56.“人间烟火味,最抚凡人心”,2020年初,由于新冠肺炎的爆发,很多人都不得不待在家里,而不能外出打工谋生。"地摊"如雨后春笋在各大城市涌现。假如你是李华,在本周班会上将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次摆地摊的体验活动。内容如下:
时间 周日晚上7:00—9:00
本周 地点人民广场
内容 1. 出售报纸,饮料。
2. 出售旧物:书,玩具,自行车等。
3. 出售自制的蛋糕、卡片等。
你的想法和建议 ……
 
参考词汇:
roadside the standard 地摊           Renmin Square n. 人民广场
experience v.& n. 体验, 经历         meaningful adj. 有意义的
要求:
1. 必须包含所给的全部的要点及内容, 可适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。
3. 词数80至100。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Fellow students,
This year due to the impact of COVID-19 outbreak, many people have to stay at home and can't go outside to work to earn a living. Roadside Stands have sprung up in many big cities. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该题属于材料写作。要求以李华的身份,在班会上代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次摆地摊的体验活动。写作时注意问题信息要写齐全。
【参考范文】
Follow students,
This year, due to the inspact of COVID-19 outbreak, many people have to stay at home and can't go outside to work to earn a living. Roadside Stands have sprung up in many big cities. This Sunday evening our class plans to experience this activity. Here is the information you need to know.
The activity will last for two hours. We'd better arrive at Renmin Square at 7 p.m. We will sell different kinds of things such as newspapers and drinks. We can also sell some old things including books, toys and bikes. Besides, if you are good at DIY, I think cakes and cards made by hand will be popular.
As for the money we get, I suggest that we can give it away to the people in need. Hope you can take an active part in it. Through the activity, we can not only get some social experience but also spend a meaningful night.

【名师点评】
例文采用三段式,第一大段总体说班级要组织地摊体验活动;第二大段陈述组织地摊体验活动的时间及具体要求;第三大段陈述从这次活动中的收获及想法。本文结构清晰,段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作分析,时态主要以一般现在时为主。
高分亮点:
短语:stay at home,earn a living,had better do sth,different kinds of,be good at,give away,take an active part in,not only…but also…。
句型:1.现在完成时 Roadside Stands have sprung up in many big cities.
2. 条件状语从句 Besides, if you are good at DIY, I think cakes and cards made by hand will be popular.
3.宾语从句 I suggest that we can give it away to the people in need.

 
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