某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app,邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示,用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。

(四)【2019 •江苏省宿迁市】
某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app,邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示,用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
名称 Happy English Learning
内容 英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏等。
好处 1. 便于和同学一起学学习;
2. 帮助学生扩大词汇量;
3. 有利于提高英语听力;
4. ……(自主发挥,至少一点)
其他方面 ……(自主发挥,至少一点)
 
注意事项:
1. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容要包括表中要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯通畅;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名,校名、地名等。
Here is my design for the new app. ___________________________________________________________
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参考范文
Here is my design for the new app. It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English movies, English songs, English games and so on. It can make it easy for students to study together. It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly improved. They can also practise their spoken English by singing English songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning English by using this app.
I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.

【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如and so on,make it easy,in English study,watch films,in a word,have fun,be suitable for等。而固定句型It can make it easy for students to study together.和It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study./ I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
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