56.下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习,他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛,是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人

(六)【2020 •江苏省苏州市】

56.下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习,他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛,是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人,请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容,用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。

 

注意:
1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.文中须包括所有要点,每个要点可适当发挥,使文章连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇: workshop  n. 工作坊
Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you.
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Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you!
写作思路
本题为材料作文,要求就所给提示介绍学校的绿色星球俱乐部,写一篇发言稿。文章时态用现在时,人称用第一人称。
参考范文
Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you.
All our club members meet every Friday afternoon to do something meaningful.
We have DIY workshops. Here, old clothes can be made into handbags. It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.
Working as volunteers is our task as well. We hand out leaflets and tell people the importance of living a green life. Sometimes, we teach people how to separate waste in communities and help clean up parks and streets. Besides, we look after flowers and trees in our school.
Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you!

【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文开头结尾都已给出,需要写作的部分只是画报上的关于俱乐部的简介。例文已包含题目所给全部要点,并进行了适当发挥,文章词句连贯、通顺,符合题目要求,是一篇合格的作文。
2.高分亮点:
短语:be made into,work as,hand out,clean up,look after。
句型:
(1)Here, old clothes can be made into handbags.(被动语态)
(2)It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.(it作形式主语)
(3)Working as volunteers is our task as well.(动名词作主语)

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