（九）【2020 •四川乐山市】
71.近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象；为此，国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 上劳动课，学习生活技能；
2. 参加实践活动，如：植树、种菜等；
3. 学做家务，如：整理房间、洗衣服等；
4. 养成良好的劳动习惯。
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 参考词汇：劳动课a hardworking spirit class。
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，要点已全部给出，学生按照逻辑将其连接起来即可。时态应用一般现在时，人称应以第一人称为主。
【参考范文】
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly.
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.
In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：例文先是直奔主题，表明自己对培养劳动精神的热烈欢迎；然后从4个方面分别说明了如何培养劳动精神分别是上课、参加活动、做家务以及养成良好习惯；最后总结点题，表明培养劳动精神的重要性。语言流畅，要点齐全，无语法错误。
2.高分亮点：
take part in 参加
such as 例如
try to do sth. 尽力做某事
the importance of ……的重要性
In a word 简而言之
helps to do sth. 帮助做某事
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. 不定式作目的状语
Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. 表示连接关系的并列句
71.近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象；为此，国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 上劳动课，学习生活技能；
2. 参加实践活动，如：植树、种菜等；
3. 学做家务，如：整理房间、洗衣服等；
4. 养成良好的劳动习惯。
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 参考词汇：劳动课a hardworking spirit class。
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，要点已全部给出，学生按照逻辑将其连接起来即可。时态应用一般现在时，人称应以第一人称为主。
【参考范文】
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly.
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.
In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：例文先是直奔主题，表明自己对培养劳动精神的热烈欢迎；然后从4个方面分别说明了如何培养劳动精神分别是上课、参加活动、做家务以及养成良好习惯；最后总结点题，表明培养劳动精神的重要性。语言流畅，要点齐全，无语法错误。
2.高分亮点：
take part in 参加
such as 例如
try to do sth. 尽力做某事
the importance of ……的重要性
In a word 简而言之
helps to do sth. 帮助做某事
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. 不定式作目的状语
Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. 表示连接关系的并列句
