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63.今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求介绍你所读过的一本书。你草拟了写作流程图，请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
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注意事项：
1.短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.提供的书名非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3.词数在90个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求根据草拟的写作流程图，介绍你所读过的一本书，用英语写一篇短文参加活动。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the shark and the sea.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book. Man is not made for defeat.
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点：
短语：share with，tell about，fight against，on the way back，give up。
句型：This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea. 这本书讲述了一位渔夫的故事，他幸运地在海上捕到了一条大鱼。who在句中引导定语从句，修饰前面的a fisherman。
63.今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求介绍你所读过的一本书。你草拟了写作流程图，请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
| Choose a book "Alice in Wonderland" "Gulliver's Travels" ... |
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| Describe the book Who is it about? What happened? What kind of book? |
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| Tell the reason Why do I like it? ... |
注意事项：
1.短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.提供的书名非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3.词数在90个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求根据草拟的写作流程图，介绍你所读过的一本书，用英语写一篇短文参加活动。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the shark and the sea.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book. Man is not made for defeat.
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点：
短语：share with，tell about，fight against，on the way back，give up。
句型：This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea. 这本书讲述了一位渔夫的故事，他幸运地在海上捕到了一条大鱼。who在句中引导定语从句，修饰前面的a fisherman。
