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B.根据要求完成大作文
95.生活中我们有很多东西需要与人分享，比如：好书、美食、经验、快乐……，请你以“I'd like to share _______ with you.”为题写一篇短文。
要求：
1.请将题目补充完整；
2.介绍与该主题相关的个人经历，说明分享原因，谈谈个人感悟；
3.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，书写工整、规范；
4.词数70左右；
5.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求以I’d like to share…with you为题，写一篇作文。学生们首先应该将题目补充完整，想要分享什么，题目中也给出了一些提示，如好书、美食、经验、快乐等等。将题目补充完整后，学生再围绕这一主题，分享自己的经历，说明分享它的原因以及个人的感悟。这是话题作文，文章的内容需要学生们发挥自己的想象力，结合实际生活，写出具体的内容，这是写作中的一个难点。文章应根据表达需要确定时态，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
【参考范文】
I’d like to share a good book with you
As everybody knows, books are the ladder of human progress. I have read many books and I would like to share my favorite book the Adventures of Tom Sawyer with you. I have read it many times. The book is written by Mark Twain, a famous American writer. Tom who is the hero of the story is a lively and clever boy. He and his best friend Huck Finn ran away to an island. The most exciting part is when Tom and Huck start their adventures on the island. In my opinion, the story is so interesting and enjoyable that it is worth reading.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文以I’d like to share a good book with you为题目，在文中分享了自己最喜欢的一本书，简单介绍了书的主要角色、内容以及自己喜欢它的原因。文中内容充实、完整，叙述条理，逻辑清晰。短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式以简单句为主，并使用了并列句、状语从句、被动语态、非谓语动词等复杂结构，表达流畅，意思连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：run away；in my opinion。
句型：As everybody knows, books are the ladder of human progress.；Tom who is the hero of the story is a lively and clever boy.；The most exciting part is when Tom and Huck start their adventures on the island.；In my opinion, the story is so interesting and enjoyable that it is worth reading.。
B.根据要求完成大作文
95.生活中我们有很多东西需要与人分享，比如：好书、美食、经验、快乐……，请你以“I'd like to share _______ with you.”为题写一篇短文。
要求：
1.请将题目补充完整；
2.介绍与该主题相关的个人经历，说明分享原因，谈谈个人感悟；
3.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，书写工整、规范；
4.词数70左右；
5.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求以I’d like to share…with you为题，写一篇作文。学生们首先应该将题目补充完整，想要分享什么，题目中也给出了一些提示，如好书、美食、经验、快乐等等。将题目补充完整后，学生再围绕这一主题，分享自己的经历，说明分享它的原因以及个人的感悟。这是话题作文，文章的内容需要学生们发挥自己的想象力，结合实际生活，写出具体的内容，这是写作中的一个难点。文章应根据表达需要确定时态，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
【参考范文】
I’d like to share a good book with you
As everybody knows, books are the ladder of human progress. I have read many books and I would like to share my favorite book the Adventures of Tom Sawyer with you. I have read it many times. The book is written by Mark Twain, a famous American writer. Tom who is the hero of the story is a lively and clever boy. He and his best friend Huck Finn ran away to an island. The most exciting part is when Tom and Huck start their adventures on the island. In my opinion, the story is so interesting and enjoyable that it is worth reading.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文以I’d like to share a good book with you为题目，在文中分享了自己最喜欢的一本书，简单介绍了书的主要角色、内容以及自己喜欢它的原因。文中内容充实、完整，叙述条理，逻辑清晰。短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式以简单句为主，并使用了并列句、状语从句、被动语态、非谓语动词等复杂结构，表达流畅，意思连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：run away；in my opinion。
句型：As everybody knows, books are the ladder of human progress.；Tom who is the hero of the story is a lively and clever boy.；The most exciting part is when Tom and Huck start their adventures on the island.；In my opinion, the story is so interesting and enjoyable that it is worth reading.。
