71. 假定你是李华,你校将举办校园音乐节(music festival)。请给你的好友Alan写一封电子邮件,介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动

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71.    假定你是李华,你校将举办校园音乐节(music festival)。请给你的好友Alan写一封电子邮件,介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动,并邀请他与你一起参加此次音乐节。邮件内容包括:
Time 10 a.m. next Sunday
Place school sports field
Activities for students sell tickets, work at food stands… (all of the money will go to charity)
play the violin, piano…
sing songs, dance to music…
 
 
注意:
l. 词数90左右,开头和结尾己经写好,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
参考词汇:摊位  stand    慈善charity
Dear Alan,
How is it going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作思路
该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据内容提示介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动。
【参考范文
Dear Alan,
How is it going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday on the school sports field. Knowing that you are fond of music, I'm writing to invite you to join us.
The festival will start at 10: 00 am and last about two hours. Students from my school will give fantastic performances, including playing the violin, piano, guitar and so on. Besides, we can sing songs and dance to music. Meanwhile, some of my classmates will sell tickets and I will work at a food stand. All of the money will go to charity.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:hold a music festival;are fond of;and so on;sing songs and dance to music;at a food stand; look forward to。
句型:Knowing that…现在分词作状语的句子;and表示并列的句子;that引导的宾语从句。

 
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