53.众志成城抗疫情,齐心向阳迎春天。随着新冠肺炎疫情的有效控制,各校已经陆续复学,久别的师生回到了熟悉的校园。

【2020•湖北省咸宁市】
53.众志成城抗疫情,齐心向阳迎春天。随着新冠肺炎疫情的有效控制,各校已经陆续复学,久别的师生回到了熟悉的校园。复学后,王老师在班上将开展一个主题为“Share your life at home during the COVID-19”的演讲活动,让同学们分享疫情期间居家生活的经历和感受。假如你是李华,请从以下四个方面写一份演讲稿。
1 Study have online classes (上网课), do homework …
2 Housework clean the rooms, cook the dishes …
3 Leisure activities do sports, watch TV …
4 Feeling warm happy …
 
写作要求:
1. 文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名。
2. 文章须包含所提供主要信息,可适当发挥;行文连贯,条理清晰。
3. 词数80~100个,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总字数。
Hello, everyone! Long time no see. It's my honor to share my life at home during the COVID-19 with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,主要是介绍疫情期间居家生活的经历和感受,从学习、家务活、业余活动和感受四个方面来写,根据写作的内容应用第一人称和一般过去时。 
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! Long time no see. It's my honor to share my life at home during the COVID-19 with you. At home, I had online classes on the Internet. I could see my teacher through the computer or the cellphone. After having the class, I did my homework. Then, I used the cellphone to send the photos of homework to my teachers. In the spare time, I cleaned my rooms, learnt to cook the dishes for my parents, and so on. Besides, I watched TV, listened to music, or did sports at home. At that time, though we couldn't go out because of the COVID-19, we had a happy and warm family life. We should study hard from now on and treasure the present life.

【名师点评】
例文包含了所有要点,时态使用正确,表达有条理,语句通顺,意思连贯,使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点:
短语:through the computer or the cellphone;use sth. to do;send sth. to sb.;in the spare time;listen to music;from now on。
句型:①时间状语从句 After having the class, I did my homework.
②让步状语从句 At that time, though we couldn't go out because of the COVID-19, we had a happy and warm family life.

 
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