61.青少年是祖国的未来。在创建全国文明城市的过程中,你市举办了“美德少年”评选活动。请根据以下提示,以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题

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61.青少年是祖国的未来。在创建全国文明城市的过程中,你市举办了“美德少年”评选活动。请根据以下提示,以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题,用英语写一篇倡议书,号召大家积极争做“美德少年”。
要点:
1. 在学校:努力学习知识,养成良好的学习习惯,爱运动;
2. 在家里:经常与家人交流,感恩父母,分担家务,知错就改;
3. 在社会:遵守规则,在公共场合不要大声喧哗,注意安全;
4. 发表你的观点。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;
2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
4. 词数:80-100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Be a Virtue Teenager
Teenagers are the future of our motherland, and also the symbol of our city. What should we do to become a virtue teenager of our city?
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【写作思路】本文是一篇话题作文,以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题,用英语写一篇倡议书,号召大家积极争做“美德少年”,并从学校、家庭、社会三方面谈谈自己的观点和做法。结合所给材料,可知主要考查一般现在时态,人称主要为第一人称,注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用,写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
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Be a Virtue Teenager
Teenagers are the future of our motherland, and also the symbol of our city. What should we do to become a virtue teenager of our city?
At school, we should study hard and form good learning habits. In our spare time, we can do regular exercise to build up a good body. It's our duty to help parents do some housework at home and we should always be thankful for what our parents have done for us. Parents will be happier if we can communicate more with them. Sometimes, if we make mistakes, we'd better face and correct them timely. What's more, I suggest we obey the rules in public and don't speak loudly. Last but not least, keep in mind that safety is first.
In my opinion, we are supposed to do all of the above. I sincerely hope everyone can join us and try to be a virtue teenager.

【名师点评】
本文结构紧凑,逻辑顺畅。首段开门见山,直接点明文章“争做美德少年”的主旨,第二段从学校、家庭以及社会三方面浅谈自己作“美德少年”的方法,最后一段总结全文,升华文章立意。另外文章语言简练,运用简单的句式结构将题目主要内容完整表述。
高分亮点:
短语:in our spare time;build up;be thankful fo;make mistake;last but not least;be supposed to。
句型:It+be+名词+不定式(it作形式主语);if引导的条件状语从句。
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