【2020 •四川攀枝花】
71． 初中毕业了，我们又将进入高一级的学校学习，利用这个暑假，我们更应该制定合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示，以"My Summer Vacation Plan"为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 放松自己：看电影，锻炼身体，和父母去旅行等；
2. 学习新技能：做饭、游泳、骑自行车等；
3. 努力学习：阅读书籍，复习知识，为以后学习做准备等。
要求：
1. 词数80~100，开头已给出，但不计入总词数；
2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My Summer Vacation Plan
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题属于话题作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据要点提示和要求写一篇题为“My Summer Vacation Plan”的短文，介绍自己的暑假安排。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
My Summer Vacation Plan
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, I plan to relax myself, such as watching movies and traveling with my parents. I'll exercise every day, for it is good for our health to play sports. Then, I am going to spend some time learning cooking, swimming and bike riding. In my opinion, these skills will be useful and helpful in my future life. At the same time, I'll read some books to open up my eyes. I also plan to review knowledge to prepare for future study.
I think I'll have a meaningful summer vacation.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，第一段介绍了自己打算如何放松自己、要学习哪些新技能及暑假期间的学习安排，第二段属于自主发挥，写出自己的感想。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
高分亮点：
单词和短语：make a plan；plan to do sth.；relax oneself；such as；be good for；spend some time doing sth.；in one's opinion；at the same time；open up one's eyes；prepare for。
句型：for连接的表示因果关系的并列句；省略that的宾语从句。
71． 初中毕业了，我们又将进入高一级的学校学习，利用这个暑假，我们更应该制定合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示，以"My Summer Vacation Plan"为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. 放松自己：看电影，锻炼身体，和父母去旅行等；
2. 学习新技能：做饭、游泳、骑自行车等；
3. 努力学习：阅读书籍，复习知识，为以后学习做准备等。
要求：
1. 词数80~100，开头已给出，但不计入总词数；
2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My Summer Vacation Plan
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题属于话题作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据要点提示和要求写一篇题为“My Summer Vacation Plan”的短文，介绍自己的暑假安排。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
My Summer Vacation Plan
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, I plan to relax myself, such as watching movies and traveling with my parents. I'll exercise every day, for it is good for our health to play sports. Then, I am going to spend some time learning cooking, swimming and bike riding. In my opinion, these skills will be useful and helpful in my future life. At the same time, I'll read some books to open up my eyes. I also plan to review knowledge to prepare for future study.
I think I'll have a meaningful summer vacation.
【名师点评】
例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，第一段介绍了自己打算如何放松自己、要学习哪些新技能及暑假期间的学习安排，第二段属于自主发挥，写出自己的感想。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
高分亮点：
单词和短语：make a plan；plan to do sth.；relax oneself；such as；be good for；spend some time doing sth.；in one's opinion；at the same time；open up one's eyes；prepare for。
句型：for连接的表示因果关系的并列句；省略that的宾语从句。
