六、书面表达
81.学校网站英语栏目将组织读书分享征文活动，请根据提示，写一篇短文投稿。
注意事项：
（1）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题是一篇话题作文。主要以“My favourite book”展开描写。文章要写出题目中给出的所有的要点，同时也可以自行发挥，可以使用现在时描写，要注意语言的衔接要自然连贯。
【参考范文】
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, the Monkey King is my favourite book.
The Monkey King is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. He is not a normal monkey. In fact,he is brave enough to fight with any bad person and he can always win the fights. So I like to read it.
The book mainly talks about three things. First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can change into. Secondly, the book shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but not least, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. And it also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it tells us to keep trying in our lives and never give up.
【名师点评】
例文点评：文章分四段描写。第一段开篇点题最喜欢的书是什么；第二段介绍书名的由来；第三段介绍整本书中的内容；第四段写为什么要读这本书，能够学到什么。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确，意思明确通俗易懂。
高分亮点：
短语：in fact；fight with；talk about；first of all；try one’s best to do；be in trouble；give up。
句型：how引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；so…that引导的结果状语从句。
81.学校网站英语栏目将组织读书分享征文活动，请根据提示，写一篇短文投稿。
| My favourite book *What’s the name? *What’s it about? *Why do you like it? … |
注意事项：
（1）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题是一篇话题作文。主要以“My favourite book”展开描写。文章要写出题目中给出的所有的要点，同时也可以自行发挥，可以使用现在时描写，要注意语言的衔接要自然连贯。
【参考范文】
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, the Monkey King is my favourite book.
The Monkey King is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. He is not a normal monkey. In fact,he is brave enough to fight with any bad person and he can always win the fights. So I like to read it.
The book mainly talks about three things. First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can change into. Secondly, the book shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but not least, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. And it also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it tells us to keep trying in our lives and never give up.
【名师点评】
例文点评：文章分四段描写。第一段开篇点题最喜欢的书是什么；第二段介绍书名的由来；第三段介绍整本书中的内容；第四段写为什么要读这本书，能够学到什么。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确，意思明确通俗易懂。
高分亮点：
短语：in fact；fight with；talk about；first of all；try one’s best to do；be in trouble；give up。
句型：how引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；so…that引导的结果状语从句。
