【2020 •沈阳市】
65.为了鼓励学生积极参加体育活动，你的学校即将举办英文征文比赛假设你是李华，请你以Doing sports makes me ________为题，参与投稿。
要求：
1. 确定主题，说明原因；
2. 围绕主题，进行叙述或阐述；
3. 词数80-100。
注意：
1. 补全标题（参考词语： healthy，happy，relaxed，strong等）；
2. 可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以阐述具体观点；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
5. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Doing sports makes me ________
Recently, sports have been very popular with many people. In my opinion, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，为了鼓励学生积极参加体育活动，学校即将举办英文征文比赛。假设你是李华，要求你以Doing sports makes me ____为题，根据要点提示写一篇短文，参与投稿。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Doing sports makes me strong
Recently, sports have been very popular with many people. In my opinion, doing sports makes me strong because it builds up my body and mind.
I was short and thin before, so my father always took me out for running. At first, I usually felt tired and wanted to give up. But my father encouraged me to stick with it. Half a year later, I grew taller and stronger. At the sports meeting this year, I even won the first prize in the 1, 500-metre race. Since then, I have been stronger and stronger and I don't fear any difficulty.
In a word, doing sports makes me strong.
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文主要采用第一人称复数展开叙述，文章构严谨，层次分明，紧扣主题。语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点：
短语：in my opinion，build up，want to do sth，give up，encourage sb to do，stick with。
句型：But my father encouraged me to stick with it.但我父亲鼓励我坚持下去。encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事。
Since then, I have been stronger and stronger and I don't fear any difficulty. 从那时起，我变得越来越强壮，我不再害怕任何困难。stronger and stronger越来越强壮，比较级+and+比较级，表示越来越……。
65.为了鼓励学生积极参加体育活动，你的学校即将举办英文征文比赛假设你是李华，请你以Doing sports makes me ________为题，参与投稿。
要求：
1. 确定主题，说明原因；
2. 围绕主题，进行叙述或阐述；
3. 词数80-100。
注意：
1. 补全标题（参考词语： healthy，happy，relaxed，strong等）；
2. 可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以阐述具体观点；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
5. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Doing sports makes me ________
Recently, sports have been very popular with many people. In my opinion, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，为了鼓励学生积极参加体育活动，学校即将举办英文征文比赛。假设你是李华，要求你以Doing sports makes me ____为题，根据要点提示写一篇短文，参与投稿。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Doing sports makes me strong
Recently, sports have been very popular with many people. In my opinion, doing sports makes me strong because it builds up my body and mind.
I was short and thin before, so my father always took me out for running. At first, I usually felt tired and wanted to give up. But my father encouraged me to stick with it. Half a year later, I grew taller and stronger. At the sports meeting this year, I even won the first prize in the 1, 500-metre race. Since then, I have been stronger and stronger and I don't fear any difficulty.
In a word, doing sports makes me strong.
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文主要采用第一人称复数展开叙述，文章构严谨，层次分明，紧扣主题。语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点：
短语：in my opinion，build up，want to do sth，give up，encourage sb to do，stick with。
句型：But my father encouraged me to stick with it.但我父亲鼓励我坚持下去。encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事。
Since then, I have been stronger and stronger and I don't fear any difficulty. 从那时起，我变得越来越强壮，我不再害怕任何困难。stronger and stronger越来越强壮，比较级+and+比较级，表示越来越……。
