61.假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下:

【2020 •安徽省】
61.假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下:
1.熟悉家乡;
2.乐于交流;
3.擅长英语。
注意:1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: journalist (n.记者);column (n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作思路
本题属于书信作文,信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.
First, I know a lot about my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job. I'm easy-going and always ready to communicate with others. Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English, and I'm skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.
I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for. I'd be thankful if I could get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,先表达写信目的,然后根据要点提示介绍自己,最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
高分亮点:
单词和短语:hope to do sth.;a member of;such as;besides;used to do sth.;work as;do a very good job;be ready to do sth.;communicate with;moreover;have a good knowledge of;be skillful at;in English;look for。
句型:and连接并列句;省略that的定语从句;if引导的条件状语从句。

 
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