71. 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友David对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示,用英语写一封电子邮件

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71.    假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友David对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示,用英语写一封电子邮件,向他推荐即将在你校举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动,说明推荐理由,并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。

 

注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear David,
I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,
Li Hua

写作思路
本文是一篇书信作文。文中向朋友推荐即将举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动,并说明推荐理由。
参考范文
Dear David,
I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I'd like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020.
On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And there will be a show about its development. Also, the film Li Shizhen will be on. I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. intelschool. com and have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine.
Best wishes.

Yours,
Li Hua

【名师点评】
例文点评:本文主要以第一人称为主,时态主要采用一般将来时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强,句子通顺。
高分亮点:
短语:share with sb about sth与某人分享某事;take place举行;be helpful to sb对某人有帮助。
句子:there will be a show about its development句中用的是there be句型;I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you句中由that引导的宾语从句,引导词that已省略。

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