【2020 •云南省】
56.提示：在课余生活中,你通常做些什么？有什么收获？请以“My After-school Life”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的课余生活。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
My After-school Life
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【写作思路】
该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述自己的课余生活及收获。
【参考范文】
My After-school Life
Though school life is very busy, my life after school is colourful and enjoyable.
First of all, I need to finish my homework, which is the first thing I need to do. Only when I finish my homework, will I go to play with my friends happily. Playing badminton is my favourite sport after school. In my opinion, sport contributes to my health which is important in daily life.
I am so satisfied with myself, because I not only study hard, but also enjoy myself after school. As a student, I need to study. At the same time, I  need to enjoy my childhood.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述自己的课余生活及收获叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：first of all; need to; play with; in my opinion; contributes to; am satisfied with; at the same time。
句型：though引导的让步状语从句；Only when… will I…部分倒装结构；which引导的定语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；not only…but also…的结构。