(B)
87.假定你是王伟, 你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
家庭安全：小心用火用电, 外出时关好门窗；
游泳安全：不独自去游泳, 不去河、湖游泳；
交通安全：过马路要当心, 不在马路上玩耍。
提示词：electricity (n.电)
注意：
1、词数80左右；
2、请不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥。
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school has made safety rules for us to follow. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
本文是一篇书信作文，假定你是王伟, 你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。要求根据要点提示，给他回一封电子邮件。首先要注意邮件的格式，然后认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school has made safety rules for us to follow. Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave. Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. If we really want to, we must go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary because safety comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点：
短语：play with，make sure，what's more，watch out，warn sb（not）to do sth。
句型：It is dangerous to play with fire.玩火是危险的。It is+形容词+to do sth.去做某事是……的，固定句型。
I think these rules are necessary because safety comes first. 我认为这些规则是必要的，因为安全第一。I think后接宾语从句，because引导原因状语从句。
87.假定你是王伟, 你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
家庭安全：小心用火用电, 外出时关好门窗；
游泳安全：不独自去游泳, 不去河、湖游泳；
交通安全：过马路要当心, 不在马路上玩耍。
提示词：electricity (n.电)
注意：
1、词数80左右；
2、请不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥。
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school has made safety rules for us to follow. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Wei
【写作思路】Wang Wei
本文是一篇书信作文，假定你是王伟, 你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。要求根据要点提示，给他回一封电子邮件。首先要注意邮件的格式，然后认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Dear David,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school has made safety rules for us to follow. Let me tell you something about them.
We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible accidents. We should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave. Besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. If we really want to, we must go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. What's more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch out when crossing the road. And our school warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary because safety comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
【名师点评】Wang Wei
例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点：
短语：play with，make sure，what's more，watch out，warn sb（not）to do sth。
句型：It is dangerous to play with fire.玩火是危险的。It is+形容词+to do sth.去做某事是……的，固定句型。
I think these rules are necessary because safety comes first. 我认为这些规则是必要的，因为安全第一。I think后接宾语从句，because引导原因状语从句。
