9．（2018·山东省中考真题）
分享是一种行为方式，也是一种良好的品质（quality）， 人生处处充满分享，懂得分享非常重要。分享快乐，快乐加倍；分担烦恼，烦恼减半。
请根据以上观点，结合思维导图所示，以“My Sharing Experience”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。
要求：1.短文须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2.题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：be full of, cut…in half, thanks to, overcome
My Sharing Experience
Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people _____________________
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My Sharing Experience
【答案】My Sharing Experience
Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people. Everyone has his experience of sharing. So do I. I often share my feelings with my mum. When I make progress or win a competition, I share my happiness with my mum. After seeing a big smile on her face, I get a sense of satisfaction. When I meet some troubles and feel depressed, I told my sadness to her. She always hugs me and comforts me. Her courageous words make me learn that love is always around me. It makes my heart full of warmth and strength. To sum up, sharing my feelings with mum is really a good way which drives my bad mood and brings me pleasure. As a saying goes, ‘Share your happiness, your happiness doubles; share your sorrow, your sorrow cuts to half.’
【解析】
本文属于话题作文，描述分享的经历、意义以及感悟。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如so引导的倒装句, share with, make progress, a sense of, make sb do, full of, to sum up以及谚语Share your happiness, your happiness doubles; share your sorrow, your sorrow cuts to half。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
