最近,你美国的笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼,他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件——提出你的一些建议。

(十二)【2019 •湖南省益阳市】
最近,你美国的笔友Tony在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼,他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件——提出你的一些建议。
建议内容包括:遇到问题多倾诉,多与他人分享情绪,尊重他人,与人为善,诚实守信……
要求:l.词数60-80,开头结尾己给出,不计入总词数;
      2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
      3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇:share   solve     respect     friendly     be honest to
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates: I'm glad to help you. ________________________
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    I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作思路
本文的写作要求是一封电子邮件。首先,对于朋友在交友过程中遇到难题表示歉意。用情态动词提建议,最后希望能交到跟多朋友。然后,分步骤给出另外四个建议处理和同学们的关系。最后希望一切会好起来。
参考范文
Dear Tony,
I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. I'm glad to help you. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, when you have difficulties, you should talk to your parents, your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them. They will help you solve the problem.
Second, when you get along with your friends, you are supposed to respect them.
Third, you should be friendly to people around you. You can help each other.
Last but not least, you have to be honest to your friends. Then you will make more friends.
I hope everything will go well with you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文对于在和同学们交往中遇到的问题提出建议,分四步给出合理建议,最后指出对朋友要诚实,并希望能够交到更多朋友。用到的短语有:share sth. with sb.;get along with和……相处;be supposed to do应该做某事和Last but not least等,使得文章丰富多彩;长短句搭配合理。
 
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