"谁知盘中餐,粒粒皆辛苦。"有数据显示,中国餐饮业人均食物浪费量为每餐 93克,浪费率为11.7%。

七、书面表达 (本大题满分 15 分)
38.(15分)"谁知盘中餐,粒粒皆辛苦。"有数据显示,中国餐饮业人均食物浪费量为每餐 93克,浪费率为11.7%。减少餐饮浪费,是践行绿色发展理念的必然要求。倡导餐桌上的文明新风,需要我们共同努力。请你依据下列三个要点提示,用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点提示:
(1)你和身边的人平时就餐是否节约;
(2)叙述一次你经历过的与节约或者浪费有关的就餐过程;
(3)简单表述你对这次就餐的看法。
2.注意事项:
(1)用词在90个左右;
(2)行文应连贯流畅;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名或校名。
 
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分析】【高分句型一】
None of them wanted to pack,but I packed everything I could take with me.他们都不想打包,但我把能带的东西都打包了。but但是,引导的并列句
【高分句型二】
Through this action,I think it is our responsibility to cherish food.通过这次行动,我认为珍惜食物是我们的责任。宾语从句
解答】Waste is a common and serious problem.I often see all kinds of waste around me,such as food,water and electricity.(身边的人有时浪费) Once I went out to dinner with my friends and there was a lot of food left after the meal.None of them wanted to pack,but I packed everything I could take with me.【高分句型一】My behavior was praised by the people around me.(过程) Through this action,I think it is our responsibility to cherish food. 【高分句型二】In the future,I will encourage people around me to cherish food.(看法)
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕提示内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
 
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