46. 假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华,请你写一则通知,为学校近期要举行的排球比赛(the 2020 Student Volleyball Match) 招募志愿者。

第四部分 书面表达(共两节,满分40分)
第一节 (满分15分)
46. 假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华,请你写一则通知,为学校近期要举行的排球比赛(the 2020 Student Volleyball Match) 招募志愿者。内容包括:
1.招募目的;2.招募条件;3.培训时间和地点。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
答案】                                                                                                                                                                     NOTICE
The 2020 Student Volleyball Match is scheduled to be held in our school. In order to ensure the smooth running of the event, it is necessary to recruit volunteers to provide quality services.
The volunteers are required not only to be healthy and organized, but to be able to respond to the emergencies in flexible approaches. In addition, the ones with genuine passion for sports or related experience are preferred. Once accepted, the volunteers will receive appropriate and efficient training in the gymnasium next weekend. Looking forward to your application.
Students’ Union
解析
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一则通知,为学校近期要举行的排球比赛招募志愿者。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分总法
要点:
1.招募目的;2.招募条件;3.培训时间和地点。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
the 2020 Student Volleyball Match;be scheduled to;in order to;recruit volunteers;not only…but…;respond to;with genuine passion for;look forward to;
第三步:连词成句
1. The 2020 Student Volleyball Match is scheduled to be held in our school.
2. In order to ensure the smooth running of the event, it is necessary to recruit volunteers to provide quality services.
3. The volunteers are required not only to be healthy and organized, but to be able to respond to the emergencies in flexible approaches.
4. In addition, the ones with genuine passion for sports or related experience are preferred.
5. Once accepted, the volunteers will receive appropriate and efficient training in the gymnasium next weekend.
6. Looking forward to your application.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:and;not only…but (also)…;In addition;What is more, Besides(供参考)
2.表条件关系:Once;
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to ensure the smooth running of the event, it is necessary to recruit volunteers to provide quality services.(使用了动词不定式作目的状语和由it作形式主语)
[高分句型2] The volunteers are required not only to be healthy and organized, but to be able to respond to the emergencies in flexible approaches.(使用了由not only…but (also)连接的并列成分)
[高分句型3] In addition, the ones with genuine passion for sports or related experience are preferred.(使用了with介词短语作定语)
 
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