8．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was dark and gloomy as the dark night swallowed the dense forest. The clear, starry skies in the backdrop (背景) made for a fitting view as the young koala bear made his way home along the river.
It was his first day out to search for food. He remembered every word that his mom said to him as he made his way back. But the words, “be back before dark,” were haunting (萦绕) him the most.
But the little bear lost track of time as the sun started to move towards the horizons.
The darkness had changed all that. His only guiding light was the shining north star in the sky, another advice from his mother which he refused to forget.
Suddenly, the north star disappeared. It seemed it was swallowed in the same blackness which had taken over the jungle.
But there was light, a raging light which seemed different to the little koala. It couldn’t be the sun, he thought.
It seemed it was getting nearer. The little bear stopped dead in his tracks. This didn’t seem right. Suddenly, a heat wave hit him in the face as he was surrounded by flames.
Battered and bruised (遍体鳞伤), the koala ran away from the flames. He could feel the fire chasing him, as the heat got stronger. He felt it creeping up his back almost reaching his fluffy ears. He was scared to death.
He longed to be home with his mom, away from this disorder. However, he was panicking, not knowing what to do. The heat was getting unbearable. He saw a hollow tree trunk in the distance. The little bear dived into it, hoping to find some relief from the flames.
But the unforgiving flames made him realize his mistake almost immediately. The poor soul looked on as the flames started to eat away at the trunk. The dryness made it all the more delicious for this fire monster to feast on the dead tree. The heat had made the little bear exhausted. He used the last bit of energy which he had left to run from the trunk, escaping from the flames.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
All of a sudden, his fur caught fire.
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Paragraph 2:
A moment later the little bear was in the river with his mom.
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【答案】One possible version
All of a sudden, his fur caught fire. Desperately looking around for help, the little bear screamed loudly as the pain got unbearable. He was too young to die. Maybe this was it, the little bear thought. My mom would be so sad. All of a sudden the little bear was pulled from the ground up in the air, and down again. But he didn’t fall. He felt a warm embrace instead of the burning pain which had engulfed his being a short while ago. Mom was here.
A moment later the little bear was in the river with his mom. Mom cleaned his wounds and put out the fire om him. Relieved, the little boy climbed onto Mom’s back as she swam across the shallow part of the river and rested once both were on the other side. The sight of the flames growing larger felt frightening as they looked on, but the thought of being safe on the other side gave the family peace of mind as they both started walking towards home. What a close escape!
【分析】
本文是记叙文，讲述小考拉熊第一次外出觅食，回家途中不但迷失了方向，还遭遇森林大火，就在它绝望的时刻，妈妈及时赶到并带它成功逃离险境。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，他的皮毛着火了。”可知，第一段可描小考拉熊处于生死关头时的心理活动和后续情况。
②由第二段首句内容“一会儿，小熊和妈妈一起到了河里。”可知，第二段可描写小考拉熊和妈妈逃离险境后所思所想。
2.续写线索：皮毛着火——想到妈妈——及时救援——逃离火场——平复心情
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.大声尖叫：scream loudly/shriek loudly
②.扑灭：put out the fire/extinguish the fire
③.回家：walk towards home/go back home/return home
情绪类
①.绝望：desperately/hopelessly
②.令人害怕的：frightening/terrifying
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Desperately looking around for help, the little bear screamed loudly as the pain got unbearable.（现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型2]. He felt a warm embrace instead of the burning pain which had engulfed his being a short while ago.（which引导限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]. The sight of the flames growing larger felt frightening as they looked on, but the thought of being safe on the other side gave the family peace of mind as they both started walking towards home. （as引导时间状语从句）
It was dark and gloomy as the dark night swallowed the dense forest. The clear, starry skies in the backdrop (背景) made for a fitting view as the young koala bear made his way home along the river.
It was his first day out to search for food. He remembered every word that his mom said to him as he made his way back. But the words, “be back before dark,” were haunting (萦绕) him the most.
But the little bear lost track of time as the sun started to move towards the horizons.
The darkness had changed all that. His only guiding light was the shining north star in the sky, another advice from his mother which he refused to forget.
Suddenly, the north star disappeared. It seemed it was swallowed in the same blackness which had taken over the jungle.
But there was light, a raging light which seemed different to the little koala. It couldn’t be the sun, he thought.
It seemed it was getting nearer. The little bear stopped dead in his tracks. This didn’t seem right. Suddenly, a heat wave hit him in the face as he was surrounded by flames.
Battered and bruised (遍体鳞伤), the koala ran away from the flames. He could feel the fire chasing him, as the heat got stronger. He felt it creeping up his back almost reaching his fluffy ears. He was scared to death.
He longed to be home with his mom, away from this disorder. However, he was panicking, not knowing what to do. The heat was getting unbearable. He saw a hollow tree trunk in the distance. The little bear dived into it, hoping to find some relief from the flames.
But the unforgiving flames made him realize his mistake almost immediately. The poor soul looked on as the flames started to eat away at the trunk. The dryness made it all the more delicious for this fire monster to feast on the dead tree. The heat had made the little bear exhausted. He used the last bit of energy which he had left to run from the trunk, escaping from the flames.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
All of a sudden, his fur caught fire.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
A moment later the little bear was in the river with his mom.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version
All of a sudden, his fur caught fire. Desperately looking around for help, the little bear screamed loudly as the pain got unbearable. He was too young to die. Maybe this was it, the little bear thought. My mom would be so sad. All of a sudden the little bear was pulled from the ground up in the air, and down again. But he didn’t fall. He felt a warm embrace instead of the burning pain which had engulfed his being a short while ago. Mom was here.
A moment later the little bear was in the river with his mom. Mom cleaned his wounds and put out the fire om him. Relieved, the little boy climbed onto Mom’s back as she swam across the shallow part of the river and rested once both were on the other side. The sight of the flames growing larger felt frightening as they looked on, but the thought of being safe on the other side gave the family peace of mind as they both started walking towards home. What a close escape!
【分析】
本文是记叙文，讲述小考拉熊第一次外出觅食，回家途中不但迷失了方向，还遭遇森林大火，就在它绝望的时刻，妈妈及时赶到并带它成功逃离险境。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，他的皮毛着火了。”可知，第一段可描小考拉熊处于生死关头时的心理活动和后续情况。
②由第二段首句内容“一会儿，小熊和妈妈一起到了河里。”可知，第二段可描写小考拉熊和妈妈逃离险境后所思所想。
2.续写线索：皮毛着火——想到妈妈——及时救援——逃离火场——平复心情
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.大声尖叫：scream loudly/shriek loudly
②.扑灭：put out the fire/extinguish the fire
③.回家：walk towards home/go back home/return home
情绪类
①.绝望：desperately/hopelessly
②.令人害怕的：frightening/terrifying
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Desperately looking around for help, the little bear screamed loudly as the pain got unbearable.（现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型2]. He felt a warm embrace instead of the burning pain which had engulfed his being a short while ago.（which引导限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]. The sight of the flames growing larger felt frightening as they looked on, but the thought of being safe on the other side gave the family peace of mind as they both started walking towards home. （as引导时间状语从句）
