5．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Ray was caught up in his thoughts watching the clouds outside the window. Some of the kids were playing with paper planes and others just chatting Their teacher had gone out. And when he returned there was a boy with him. Ray was suddenly brought back to earth. The boy was newly admitted. He looked so tired and his clothes were ragged and dirty. The teacher introduced him to the class. The boy's name was "Richard". He went and sat at a nearby seat behind Ray.
After the class Ray and his friends were chatting together. They heard the new boy's conversation with the nerd(呆瓜) of the class Ben. He was saying that he belonged to a low class family and he was really looking forward to study hard and get good marks. This caught the attention of Ray and his friends. So they called out to him, "Hey new boy, what's up with your clothes?"Another called out, "Didn't have enough money to buy yourself some decent clothing? Do you have enough money to buy food at least?" "And your name's Richard, Rich for short, kind of opposite of what you are." Ray and his friends burst out laughing.
Richard felt embarrassed and he went away with Ben. The next day the same thing happened. They were taunting(奚落) him.
During the evening, Ray was taking a walk across the street. He saw Richard, who was feeding a piece of bread to a puppy which was tied to a pole in front of a very dirty old house as if it had done a terrible crime and was about to be executed(处决). The puppy was having difficulty in breathing. It was tied so tightly around the neck. Richard tried to remove the rope, but as it was about to come out, a tall drunk man came out from the house. He grabbed him around the neck and lifted him upwards. Richard begged him to leave him alone and said that he wouldn't come again, but he was not putting him down.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Seeing this, Ray rushed forward and kicked the man hard from behind.
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After some time they stopped running and Richard thanked Ray.
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【答案】Seeing this, Ray rushed forward and kicked the man hard from behind. That man turned around to find out what happened. Richard was so quick that he grasped the chance to give his hand a hard bite. Screaming ,that man threw him at once and became angrier. Richard got up quickly and ran as fast as a rabbit. The annoyed man began to run after him.Meantime,Ray cut the rope,freeing the puppy and began to run in another direction,with the puppy in his arms. That drunk man was about to catch Richard when he fell over a stone,which clever Richard placed. Finally Richard managed to run in the direction of Ray, who was waiting for him .
After some time they stopped running and Richard thanked Ray.With great care ,Ray handed him the puppy, which appeared happy to see Richard. Tears in his eyes but smiling,Richard petted it gently and gave it another piece of bread. Ray looked at the boy ,who was still in ragged clothes.. However, it was at that moment that Ray found the dirty boy holding a puppy in his arms shining ,like the sun in the darkness. He pulled out a piece of paper and made two paper planes. He handed it to Richard, saying, “let's fly them together”
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。本文以人物为线索，讲述了新插班生Richard因穿着破旧遭受排挤捉弄，而Ray 通过一件事对Richard 有了新的认识，从而开始了一段友谊。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“看到这Ray冲上前去，从后面猛踢那个男人。”可知，第一段可描写Ray解救Richard 的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“过了一段时间，他们不再跑了，Richard对Ray表示感谢”可知，第二段可描写Ray和Richard 因这件事情而相互有了更多的了解，而成为朋友。
2.续写线索：援救--逃跑--感谢--重新认识-感悟--成为朋友
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 追赶：run after/pursue
② 抚摸 ：pet / touch the puppy
情绪类
①感谢：showing one’s appreciation/show one’s gratitude/be grateful
②生气：become angry/get angry
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Screaming ,that man threw him at once and became angrier.（现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型2] Meantime,Ray cut the rope,freeing the puppy and began to run in another direction,with the puppy in his arms.（现在分词作结果状语，with复合结构作伴随状语）
[高分句型3] However, it was at that moment that Ray found the dirty boy holding a puppy in his arms shining ,like the sun in the darkness.（强调句型，现在分词作后置定语）
Ray was caught up in his thoughts watching the clouds outside the window. Some of the kids were playing with paper planes and others just chatting Their teacher had gone out. And when he returned there was a boy with him. Ray was suddenly brought back to earth. The boy was newly admitted. He looked so tired and his clothes were ragged and dirty. The teacher introduced him to the class. The boy's name was "Richard". He went and sat at a nearby seat behind Ray.
After the class Ray and his friends were chatting together. They heard the new boy's conversation with the nerd(呆瓜) of the class Ben. He was saying that he belonged to a low class family and he was really looking forward to study hard and get good marks. This caught the attention of Ray and his friends. So they called out to him, "Hey new boy, what's up with your clothes?"Another called out, "Didn't have enough money to buy yourself some decent clothing? Do you have enough money to buy food at least?" "And your name's Richard, Rich for short, kind of opposite of what you are." Ray and his friends burst out laughing.
Richard felt embarrassed and he went away with Ben. The next day the same thing happened. They were taunting(奚落) him.
During the evening, Ray was taking a walk across the street. He saw Richard, who was feeding a piece of bread to a puppy which was tied to a pole in front of a very dirty old house as if it had done a terrible crime and was about to be executed(处决). The puppy was having difficulty in breathing. It was tied so tightly around the neck. Richard tried to remove the rope, but as it was about to come out, a tall drunk man came out from the house. He grabbed him around the neck and lifted him upwards. Richard begged him to leave him alone and said that he wouldn't come again, but he was not putting him down.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
Seeing this, Ray rushed forward and kicked the man hard from behind.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2
After some time they stopped running and Richard thanked Ray.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Seeing this, Ray rushed forward and kicked the man hard from behind. That man turned around to find out what happened. Richard was so quick that he grasped the chance to give his hand a hard bite. Screaming ,that man threw him at once and became angrier. Richard got up quickly and ran as fast as a rabbit. The annoyed man began to run after him.Meantime,Ray cut the rope,freeing the puppy and began to run in another direction,with the puppy in his arms. That drunk man was about to catch Richard when he fell over a stone,which clever Richard placed. Finally Richard managed to run in the direction of Ray, who was waiting for him .
After some time they stopped running and Richard thanked Ray.With great care ,Ray handed him the puppy, which appeared happy to see Richard. Tears in his eyes but smiling,Richard petted it gently and gave it another piece of bread. Ray looked at the boy ,who was still in ragged clothes.. However, it was at that moment that Ray found the dirty boy holding a puppy in his arms shining ,like the sun in the darkness. He pulled out a piece of paper and made two paper planes. He handed it to Richard, saying, “let's fly them together”
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。本文以人物为线索，讲述了新插班生Richard因穿着破旧遭受排挤捉弄，而Ray 通过一件事对Richard 有了新的认识，从而开始了一段友谊。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“看到这Ray冲上前去，从后面猛踢那个男人。”可知，第一段可描写Ray解救Richard 的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“过了一段时间，他们不再跑了，Richard对Ray表示感谢”可知，第二段可描写Ray和Richard 因这件事情而相互有了更多的了解，而成为朋友。
2.续写线索：援救--逃跑--感谢--重新认识-感悟--成为朋友
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 追赶：run after/pursue
② 抚摸 ：pet / touch the puppy
情绪类
①感谢：showing one’s appreciation/show one’s gratitude/be grateful
②生气：become angry/get angry
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Screaming ,that man threw him at once and became angrier.（现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型2] Meantime,Ray cut the rope,freeing the puppy and began to run in another direction,with the puppy in his arms.（现在分词作结果状语，with复合结构作伴随状语）
[高分句型3] However, it was at that moment that Ray found the dirty boy holding a puppy in his arms shining ,like the sun in the darkness.（强调句型，现在分词作后置定语）
