典例03
假如你是李华，要参加你校举办的以"Better English, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿讲述学英语的益处。
1.在生活上的好处；
2.在学业上的好处；
3.在就业上的好处。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文赏析】
Hello, everyone!
I am here to show that the better English, the better life.
Initially, English can enrich our lives and broaden our horizons. Having a better command of English can contribute to our reading original works. Besides, better English can improve our academic level, which increases the potential of our being admitted to a key university. Finally, international companies prefer the staff with better English. To put it differently, the more fluently you speak English, the more doors will open up to you.
Let’s better ourselves and polish our life through better English!
【思路点拨】
演讲稿是介绍性说明文，语言一定要准确简洁、通俗易懂、逻辑性强、结构多变、节奏感强。演讲稿由开头语、正文和结束语三部分组成。开头语一般来说比较简单，目的就是吸引听众或读者的注意力。考生在写作时首先要审清楚题目，题目已经要求内容包括三点，因此重点是将所要表达的语言点都表达到位，不要遗漏了某一点。同时应尽量选择自己最熟悉的单词、句型来表达自己的意思。在写作过程中注意使用起承转合的连词和高级词汇，这样作文就能得到比较高的分数。
【亮点说明】
本文语言规范，条理清楚，脉络清晰。文章用Initially，Besides，Finally分别引出文章需要说明的三个要点，层次清楚。同时开始语和结束语都简洁明了，使人易于读懂所表达信息。同时范文还使用了较多高级表达，如Having a better command of English can contribute to our reading original works.动名词做主语；better English can improve our academic level, which increases the potential of our being admitted to a key university.运用了定语从句；To put it differently, the more fluently you speak English, the more doors will open up to you.
运用了不定式作目的状语；等。
假如你是李华，要参加你校举办的以"Better English, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿讲述学英语的益处。
1.在生活上的好处；
2.在学业上的好处；
3.在就业上的好处。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文赏析】
Hello, everyone!
I am here to show that the better English, the better life.
Initially, English can enrich our lives and broaden our horizons. Having a better command of English can contribute to our reading original works. Besides, better English can improve our academic level, which increases the potential of our being admitted to a key university. Finally, international companies prefer the staff with better English. To put it differently, the more fluently you speak English, the more doors will open up to you.
Let’s better ourselves and polish our life through better English!
That’s all.
Thank you!
Thank you!
【思路点拨】
演讲稿是介绍性说明文，语言一定要准确简洁、通俗易懂、逻辑性强、结构多变、节奏感强。演讲稿由开头语、正文和结束语三部分组成。开头语一般来说比较简单，目的就是吸引听众或读者的注意力。考生在写作时首先要审清楚题目，题目已经要求内容包括三点，因此重点是将所要表达的语言点都表达到位，不要遗漏了某一点。同时应尽量选择自己最熟悉的单词、句型来表达自己的意思。在写作过程中注意使用起承转合的连词和高级词汇，这样作文就能得到比较高的分数。
【亮点说明】
本文语言规范，条理清楚，脉络清晰。文章用Initially，Besides，Finally分别引出文章需要说明的三个要点，层次清楚。同时开始语和结束语都简洁明了，使人易于读懂所表达信息。同时范文还使用了较多高级表达，如Having a better command of English can contribute to our reading original works.动名词做主语；better English can improve our academic level, which increases the potential of our being admitted to a key university.运用了定语从句；To put it differently, the more fluently you speak English, the more doors will open up to you.
运用了不定式作目的状语；等。
