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假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下4幅图的先后顺序，介绍你和家人去年9月3日观看国庆阅兵活动的过程，并以“An Unforgettable Day”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿。
注意：1.词数不少于100；2. 短文的开头已经给出, 不计入总词数。
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An Unforgettable Day
On September 3, a militray parade was held to celebrate the 70th anniversary of the victory of World War II.
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【范文】 An Unforgettable Day
On September 3, a military parade was held to celebrate the 70th anniversary of the victory of World War II.Ten minutes before the big event, we seated ourselves in front of the TV, eager to watch the live broadcast.
Soon the parade started. Seeing the soldiers and military equipment proceed along Chang’an street past Tian’anmen square, we couldn't help cheering and applauding for our powerful country.
Then the roaring of military aircraft overhead caught our attention. We rushed to the balcony and took photos of the plane flying in formation. What an impressive scene!
I couldn't wait to share my pictures and feelings with friends on WeChat Moments. To my surprise, WeChat was already flooded with numerous pictures and comments expressing love for our motherland. What's an unforgettable day!
【写作指导】
这是一篇看图作文，要求按照4幅图的先后顺序，介绍你和家人去年9月3日观看国庆阅兵活动的过程，并以“An Unforgettable Day”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿。
写作时首先要观察4张图的内容，按照图片中的内容展开对事情发展先后顺序的联想，以便自己能够很好的抓住图片中所发生的事及主要内容。考生还要注意语境是以一般过去时为主。除此外要使用平时熟练运用的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。
【亮点点击】
本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精炼，同时运用短语和高级句子。词汇和短语的使用：a military parade大阅兵，anniversary周年，broadcast直播；非谓语动词的使用：“Seeing the soldiers and military equipment proceed along Chang’an street past Tian’anmen square, we couldn't help cheering and applauding for our powerful country.”；感叹句的使用：“What an impressive scene! ”。
