假设你是红星中学高三的学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英语写一篇周记,记述春节前你跟奶奶学做剪纸的过程。

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假设你是红星中学高三的学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英语写一篇周记,记述春节前你跟奶奶学做剪纸的过程。
注意:词数100左右。
提示词:剪纸、 窗花paper cut

 

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【范文】
On February 6, I went to visit my grandma. Entering the room, I found her busy making paper cuts. Looking at the calendar, I realized it was just the right date for room decoration according to the Chinese tradition.
Attracted by the delicate works, I couldn't wait to have a try. With her patient instruction, I learnt the basic steps and skills of making paper cuts. It wasn't long before my creations were “born”. Then eagerly, we put them up. With different designs on the windows, such as a monkey and Chinese character “fu”, our room was filled with a festival atmosphere.
To share our happiness with others, we called on our next door neighbors and gave them some of our people cards. I felt proud when receiving their appreciation of our gifts.
Paper cuts made this spring festival more special. 

【写作指导】
考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

【亮点点击】
范文中运用一些常见的短语,如looking at看;according to根据;have a try尝试;put up粘贴;To share our happiness with others, we called on our next door neighbors and gave them some of our people cards.中是不定式做目的状语。

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