18.【2018年湖北省荆州】 请以“My hohby”为题写一篇短文，必须包含以下要点和词语提示信息。
1. What is your hobby?
2. How do you develop your hobby?
3.Share your happiness you get from your bobby.Give at least one example.
提示词语：practice，different，forget，no longer
要求：
l、可以适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3、词数：80词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Hobby
Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I.
【答案】My Hobby
Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I.
It may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music, though I'm not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.
Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己的爱好—听音乐。文章开头用一句话Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I，引出了短文的主题，从Everyone过度到自己，非常合适。然后作者重点介绍了自己如何培养了这一爱好，以及他从中得到的快乐。在文章的最后，与读者互动，再次重申主题。整篇文章内容完整、充实，结构清晰，叙述有条理。而且短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，句子表达符合英语的习惯，语法规范，用词准确。另外，文章中还使用了一些较好的句型，如Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I、When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music, though I'm not good at it,、When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down.、 If not, I hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.等等。尤其是When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again.这几个排比句的使用，增强了文章的表现力。
1. What is your hobby?
2. How do you develop your hobby?
3.Share your happiness you get from your bobby.Give at least one example.
提示词语：practice，different，forget，no longer
要求：
l、可以适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3、词数：80词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Hobby
Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I.
【答案】My Hobby
Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I.
It may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music, though I'm not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.
Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己的爱好—听音乐。文章开头用一句话Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I，引出了短文的主题，从Everyone过度到自己，非常合适。然后作者重点介绍了自己如何培养了这一爱好，以及他从中得到的快乐。在文章的最后，与读者互动，再次重申主题。整篇文章内容完整、充实，结构清晰，叙述有条理。而且短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，句子表达符合英语的习惯，语法规范，用词准确。另外，文章中还使用了一些较好的句型，如Everyone has his or her own hobby and so do I、When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music, though I'm not good at it,、When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down.、 If not, I hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.等等。尤其是When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again.这几个排比句的使用，增强了文章的表现力。
