12.【2018年山东东营】在你的成长历程中,一定收到过礼物。有件礼物不一定贵重,但是在你看来却非常珍贵。

12.2018年山东东营在你的成长历程中,一定收到过礼物。有件礼物不一定贵重,但是在你看来却非常珍贵。
某英语杂志以“A Precious Present(一件珍贵的礼物)”为题举办征文活动,请写一篇短文,跟大家分享。内容包括:
1.这件礼物是什么?
2.你为什么觉得它珍贵?
3.它背后有什么故事?
要求: 1.100词左右;  2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
答案】A precious present
The title “A Precious Present” reminds me of quite a few gifts I’ve got. Yet, the first come to my mind is the book, the Adventures of Tom Sawyer.
On my tenth birthday, my father gave it to me as a gift. Because I didn’t like reading, I put it on the bookshelf. One boring day, I picked it up and looked through it. Unexpectedly, the story interested me greatly. I found pleasure in reading books. From then on, I became fascinated in reading.
Though the book is not valuable, it’s precious. I’ll regard it as a treasure forever.

【解析】
这是一篇命题作文,以“A Precious Present”为题与大家分享一件自己所拥有的珍礼物。人称为第一人称,时态以一般过去时为主。写作时要注意作文的整体框架。首先介绍这件礼物的名字是什么,附带着说明它的来历,接着讲述这件礼物背后的故事,最后可以总结说明为什么这件礼物对你来说非常珍贵。另外,写作时还需注意语句间的衔接,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
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