阳光农场之旅 |
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活动时间 |
一周 |
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活动地点 |
阳光农场 |
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活动内容 |
1.帮助清理农场垃圾,搞好农场卫生; |
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2.学习种菜、植树; |
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3.野餐,采摘水果(苹果,梨……) |
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安全 tips |
不要到河里游泳,不要单独行动。 |
要求:1.字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;
3.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上相应的位置。
参考词汇: rubbish(垃圾) clear away(清理) Sunshine Farm(阳光农场)
Hello, everyone,
May I have your attention, please?
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That's all Thank you!
【答案】Hello, everyone,
May I have your attention, please?
Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm. The journey will last for one week. On the farm we're going to do some cleaning and help clear away rubbish at first. Then, we'll learn how to plant trees and grow vegetables. During the week, we will have a picnic and help the farmers pick fruits such as apples and pears. For our safety, we mustn't go swimming in the river and we should keep together. Nobody is allowed to leave the class group and go alone.
Wish you a happy journey!
That’s all. Thank you!
写作亮点：首先要点明主题“下周要去做什么”，用到了“have a journey to…”（去…旅行）这个短语。其次就针对这次旅行做出较为细致的描述，描述时间，描述即将进行的事件，提到了“do some cleaning”（帮助清扫），“help clear away rubbish”（帮助清除垃圾），plant trees（种树）、“grow vegetables”（种植蔬菜），“have a picnic”（去野餐），“help the farmers pick fruits”（帮助农民采摘水果），“be allowed to do…”（被允许去做…），其中情态动词must的用法准确，we mustn't go swimming in the river 意为“我们禁止去河里游泳”，mustn’t表示“禁止”。结尾处有祝福语“Wish you a happy journey!”，总体来说短语使用准确，时态正确，结构完整，有相关细节的补充，行文连贯，完成了既定的写作任务。
