61. 假如你是某国际学校的学生李华,你校邀请著名中医专家来校为即将举行的"生命科学周"作中医基本常识讲座。

(十四)【2020 •四川省宜宾市】
61.    假如你是某国际学校的学生李华,你校邀请著名中医专家来校为即将举行的"生命科学周"作中医基本常识讲座。请你用英语给外教James写一封邮件,邀请他参加。
内容包括:
要点 内容
时间、地点 2020年6月10号下午3—5点;学校报告厅
讲座内容 basic common sense of Chinese medicine
你对中医的态度 ……
表达愿望 ……
 
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇:生命科学周  a life science week;讲座  lecture;报告厅  lecture hall.
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作思路
这是一篇材料作文,要求以电子邮件的形式写一封邀请函,文中要提出邀请,介绍讲座内容、时间、地点,以及你对中医的态度,最后表达愿望。这样写作才能要点齐全,表达通顺。另外,要根据写作的内容选用恰当的人称和时态。 
参考范文
Dear James,
How is it going recently? Our school will have a lecture about basic common sense of traditional Chinese medicine for the coming "Life Science Week". Since you are very interested in Chinese medicine, I’m writing to invite you to attend this lecture. The lecture, to be given by a famous expert of traditional Chinese medicine , will be held in the lecture hall from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on June 10, 2020.
Today western medicine is people’s first choice, the Chinese medicine is being ignored by more and more people. But I think compared to western medicine, Chinese medicine has its own advantages. It will not out of date. I’m sure we’ll learn more about traditional Chinese medicine from this lecture.
Looking forward to meeting you at the lecture.
                                                                                                                                     
                                                                      Yours,
                                                                     Li Hua  
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文包含了所有要点,时态使用正确,表达有条理,语句通顺,意思连贯,使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点:
短语:have a lecture;be interested in;invite sb. to do;compared to;out of date;learn more about;looking forward to。
句型:①原因状语从句 Since you are very interested in Chinese medicine, I’m writing to invite you to attend this lecture.
②被动语态 The lecture, to be given by a famous expert of traditional Chinese medicine , will be held in the lecture hall from 3:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on June 10, 2020.
          Today western medicine is people’s first choice, the Chinese medicine is being ignored by more and more people.
③宾语从句 I’m sure we’ll learn more about traditional Chinese medicine from this lecture.
 
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