你校将开设一些特色课程,请你根据下表中的提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文,介 绍这些课程及开设理由,并提出你建议增设的课程以及你的理由.

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你校将开设一些特色课程,请你根据下表中的提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文,介 绍这些课程及开设理由,并提出你建议增设的课程以及你的理由.
要求:1.不要逐字逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺、语意连贯;
3.100 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数.
学校特色课程 开设理由
足球俱乐部 强身健体、鼓励合作
模型制作 走进科学、了解科学
你建议的课程 你的理由
 
Students in our school are free to choose some special after﹣school courses according to their interests.    _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________        
【答案】Students in our school are free to choose some special after﹣school courses according to their interests. They like the courses because they can enrich their lives. Here is some information.
If you are a sports fan, a football club would be a great choice. It can not only make you strong and healthy, but also offer you a good chance to make friends and encourage teamwork. For those who are interested in science, model﹣making courses would be pretty fun. Students can get to know more about science.
In my opinion, a music course would be really popular. Lots of students are suffering from the stress of studying. It is relaxing for them to play musical instruments or just listen to some songs. Besides, it can make life colorful.So why not join us in these amazing courses or clubs?

【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我们校这些特色课程及开设理由,并提出我的建议增设的课程以及我的理由。
【详解】
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Students in our school are……,It can not……,Students can……,So why not……?It is relaxing for them to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
【点评】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我们学校开设这些特色课程的理由,接下来介绍我建议增色的课程,最后表达我的理由。此处be free to do sth, according to, offer sb sth, know about等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

 
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