4．（2018·湖北省中考真题）
书面表达：
为了更好地开展八年级学生的研学旅行( study travel)，学校现面向全年级征集活动意向。假如你是李华，请谈谈你建议的时间和地点并陈述理由，简要介绍打算开展的活动。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（2）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear leaders,
I am Li Hua from Class, Grade 8. _________________________________________________
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We can discuss the details(细节)later.
I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 8. Here is my advice about our study travel.
I suggest going to Wufeng Houhe Forest Park. It is a beautiful park with green water and
mountains. There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals. We can get closer to the nature. I think June is the best time to get there. Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.
We will have lots of activities, such as climbing the mountains and studying about plants. I'm sure the travel will be both pleasant and educational
We can discuss the details(细节) later.
点评：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
书面表达：
为了更好地开展八年级学生的研学旅行( study travel)，学校现面向全年级征集活动意向。假如你是李华，请谈谈你建议的时间和地点并陈述理由，简要介绍打算开展的活动。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（2）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear leaders,
I am Li Hua from Class, Grade 8. _________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We can discuss the details(细节)later.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear leaders,Li Hua
I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 8. Here is my advice about our study travel.
I suggest going to Wufeng Houhe Forest Park. It is a beautiful park with green water and
mountains. There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals. We can get closer to the nature. I think June is the best time to get there. Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.
We will have lots of activities, such as climbing the mountains and studying about plants. I'm sure the travel will be both pleasant and educational
We can discuss the details(细节) later.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如from Class 3, Grade 8，suggest doing，Wufeng Houhe Forest Park，with green water andmountains，different kinds of，get closer to the nature，too much，at this time，in the forest park，lots of，such as等。而There are many different kinds of plants, birds and other animals./ Because there is not too much rain at this time of year and the weather in the forest park is much cooler.等there be句式和从句结构的运用，既使短文内容丰富，又使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。Li Hua
点评：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
