假如你是遵义育才中学的大明,你们学校与上海阳光中学正在实施"山与海对话"( Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea)项目

(四十二)【2019 •贵州省遵义市】
假如你是遵义育才中学的大明,你们学校与上海阳光中学正在实施"山与海对话"( Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea)项目.今年暑假,你的"手拉手"活动伙伴小海将来遵义进行首次交流活动.请根据下列提示给他写一封80词左右的书信.内容包括:
自我介绍 年龄、性格、爱好……
校园生活介绍 社团活动……
家乡介绍 自然环境,名胜古迹……
你的建议 上网了解更多有关遵义的历史与文化……
注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
      2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
      3.书信的开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数.
提示词:遵义海龙囤Zunyi Hailongtun Castle  遵义会址 Zunyi Conference Site
Dear Xiaohai,
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea. Now let me tell you something about me and my city.__________________________________________
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Welcome to my city! I'm looking forward to meeting you.
                                                                        Yours sincerely,
Daming
写作思路
本题是一篇材料作文,也是书信作文。注意书信格式。本文人称主要是第一称,时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时。认为阅读材料,认真审题,确定主题,提示要点就是本文的提纲要点,根据要点适当发挥,列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容,条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有连贯性。写完以后,注意再读一遍,看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。
参考范文
Dear Xiaohai,
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Zunyi because of the project Dialogue Between Mountain And Sea. Now let me tell you something about me and my city.I am fourteen years old. I am outgoing and like making friends. I like sports, like playing balls and running.  I also like collecting stamps. Our school life is very colorful. We can not only study very hard but also do all kinds of activities after class. After school, we often do some sports such as playing basketball, volleyball, Pingpong and so on. I join basketball club. I play basketball every Thursday afternoon after school.The natural environment in Zunyi is beautiful and there're many famous scenic spots and historical sites in Zunyi, like Zunyi Hailongtun Castle and Zunyi Conference Site. If you want to know more about Zunyi's history and culture, you can go online for it.
  Welcome to my city! I'm looking forward to meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Daming
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