（四十一）【2019 •岳阳市】
假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙，墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴流，以及考前老师的温馨提示。忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光，请你以“Preparation for High School Entrance Exam”（备战中考）为题，写一篇80-100词的短文。
1. 请阐述图中信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确。

Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以Preparation for High School Entrance Exam为题，介绍备战中考的时光。题目中用照片墙的形式呈现了备战的具体内容，并给出了一些关键词，学生们应依据这些图片和关键词，展开合理的想象，充实细节内容，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括三个方面：分学习、生活和提示三个方面解析介绍，注意分清层次和结构，合理安排各个方面的信息，注意上下文的衔接、过渡应自然。短文应以第一人称为主来叙述，时态应为一般过去时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，清晰、准确地表达自己的意思。而为了提升作文档次，应在文中穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Preparation for High School Entrance Exam
High School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it. In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time. After class, we finished our homework on time. If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details. All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying. Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on. We also did exercise every day and had enough sleep. The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax. We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. What’s more, we must be on time. We all felt tired and nervous, but what a full and happy time!
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较不错的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己和老师们一起备战中考的一段充实、快乐的时光。题目以照片墙的形式展示了备战的过程和内容，非常新颖独特，分析照片墙可知，文章应从三个方面进行介绍：学习、生活以及老师对学生的提示。这篇短文也正是按照这个思路进行展开叙述的。短文层次很清晰，叙述也很清楚。短文主要使用了一般过去时态，符合表达的需要，语法规范，注意了动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。语句通顺，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句子以简单句为基础，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句等复合句句型，调整了文章的节奏。短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it.、If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details.、Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on.、We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes.等等。