假如你是李华,想参加China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。

(三十七)【2019 •吉林】
假如你是李华,想参加China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括:1.个人信息与兴趣爱好2.梦想职业与个人计划
写作要求;1.词数90词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.  文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. ____________________________________________________
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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
写作思路
本文属于申请信,给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件,包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
参考范文
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua.I like reading and writing.I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school.And I have a habit of keeping a dairy.I want to be a writer when I grow up.So After knowing your summer camp,I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience.If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance.After work,I will spend more time making a summary.
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up以及If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance中if引导的条件句用一般现在时,主句用一般将来时,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

 
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