（二）【2020 •黑龙江哈尔滨】
80.假如你是中学生李平，曾经在你们班学习的交换生Peter看了你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。
写作要点：
1.班会的主题：我的理想
2.介绍你和几名同学的理想：
（1）赵勇：想成为一名勇敢的警察；
（2）张红：想做一名志愿者；
（3）你：想成为一名优秀的医生。
3.说说中学生如何才能实现（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear peter,
I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
这是一篇话题作文，介绍班会情况，班会的主题是谈论理想，通过分析可知，除了短文开头介绍上周班会情况，我们应该使用一般过去时态，其他内容可以使用一般现在时和一般将来时，注意谓语动词要随着时态和人称的变化而改变。
【参考范文】
Dear peter,
I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. The theme of it was “My Ideal”. Our monitor hosted the meeting. During it, all of us took an active part in the discussion and shared our opinions with each other.
Zhao Yong is going to be a brave policeman. He hopes to help people in danger. Zhang Hong wants to be a volunteer, she will help people in need especially the disabled and the homeless. My dream is to be an excellent doctor, I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.
To realize our ideals, I have some opinions. Firstly, we must try to work harder from now on and learn as much knowledge as possible. Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success. Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.
Best wishes!
1.例文点评：例文采用分段式，文中衔接流畅，在写作的时候选择了一些相对高级的词汇，也运用多种句型，句式丰富多彩，避免单一化，增加了文章的亮点，润色了文章的内容。
2.高分亮点：
短语：host the meeting；take an active part in；in danger；a meaningful job；from now on；learn from。
句型：① I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.
②Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success.
③Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.
80.假如你是中学生李平，曾经在你们班学习的交换生Peter看了你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。
写作要点：
1.班会的主题：我的理想
2.介绍你和几名同学的理想：
（1）赵勇：想成为一名勇敢的警察；
（2）张红：想做一名志愿者；
（3）你：想成为一名优秀的医生。
3.说说中学生如何才能实现（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear peter,
I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【写作思路】Li Ping
这是一篇话题作文，介绍班会情况，班会的主题是谈论理想，通过分析可知，除了短文开头介绍上周班会情况，我们应该使用一般过去时态，其他内容可以使用一般现在时和一般将来时，注意谓语动词要随着时态和人称的变化而改变。
【参考范文】
Dear peter,
I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. The theme of it was “My Ideal”. Our monitor hosted the meeting. During it, all of us took an active part in the discussion and shared our opinions with each other.
Zhao Yong is going to be a brave policeman. He hopes to help people in danger. Zhang Hong wants to be a volunteer, she will help people in need especially the disabled and the homeless. My dream is to be an excellent doctor, I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.
To realize our ideals, I have some opinions. Firstly, we must try to work harder from now on and learn as much knowledge as possible. Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success. Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【名师点评】Li Ping
1.例文点评：例文采用分段式，文中衔接流畅，在写作的时候选择了一些相对高级的词汇，也运用多种句型，句式丰富多彩，避免单一化，增加了文章的亮点，润色了文章的内容。
2.高分亮点：
短语：host the meeting；take an active part in；in danger；a meaningful job；from now on；learn from。
句型：① I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.
②Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success.
③Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.
