Simon是一位学习小组组长,在组织小组活动时,遇到组员不积极参与的情况。请根据提示,以“ Building better teamwork”为题,写一篇短文,提出你的建议。

Simon是一位学习小组组长,在组织小组活动时,遇到组员不积极参与的情况。请根据提示,以“ Building better teamwork”为题,写一篇短文,提出你的建议。
 
注意事项:
1.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。
Building better Teamwork
Teamwork can have a good influence on students’ daily study. But_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案
Building better Teamwork
Teamwork can have a good influence on students’ daily study. But sometimes when doing teamwork, some team members are not active in most of the activities. Do you know how to deal with this problem. Here are some helpful suggestions for you.
First, before you do teamwork, all the members set some team rules together. Everyone should follow the rules and respect each other.
Second, you should talk with your team in a friendly way.
Next, you can discuss this problem with your teacher if you can’t agree with each other.
Finally, you should take turns to be the team leaders, so everyone wants to make the teamwork better.
In my opinion, everyone in a team should be kind, helpful and nice to others. Let’s trust each other to build better teamwork.
解析
这是一篇给材料作文,以“ Building better teamwork”为题,写一篇短文,介绍如何建立更好的团队合作,并给出我的建议。
【详解】
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第二,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Do you know ……?Here are……,all the members set……,you should……,等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了团队合作很重要,接下来介绍关于如何建立更好的团队合作,最后表达我的观点。此处deal with, talk with, agree with, take turns to, in one’s opinion, be kind to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

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