假如你是李华，将参加今年暑期的英国伦敦游学（study tour）活动，英方提供了两个家庭供你选择居住，并征询你对游学活动的建议．请阅读以下信息，写一封电子邮件回复．
The Green family
•an old couple
no children
two dogs
•a flat， in the centre of London
•wi﹣fi
•350pounds
The Black family
•a middle﹣aged couple
a junior school boy
a primary school girl
•a house， a little far from London
•a garden
•230pounds
要求：1．所写内容必须包括某一家的所有信息及你选择的理由；
2．结合自身情况提出1﹣2点游学活动的建议；
3．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息．
Dear Sir/ Madam，
I have read the information about the two families． And I have decided to live in
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Many thanks，
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir，
I have read the information about the two families． I have decided to live in the Green family． The old couple have no children but two dogs，so they will have more time to communicate with me in English and I can play with their pets as well．Their flat is in the centre of London ，so it's easy for me to go around．I can also use the Wi﹣fi to keep in touch with my parents． My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds．
I also have good ideas for the study tour．I love history ，so I wonder if we can visit the British Museum during the stay．I'm curious about British food as well，so if you can take us to have a taste， that will be very wonderful．（建议）
I'm really looking forward to this tour!
Many thanks，
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。假如你是李华，将参加今年暑期的英国伦敦游学（study tour）活动，英方提供了两个家庭供你选择居住，并征询你对游学活动的建议。请阅读以下信息，写一封电子邮件回复。仔细阅读材料和要求提示。这些提示要点构成写作的基本框架。动笔前要认真阅读，不要遗漏要点提示，并适当发挥。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，提纲包括所有提示要点。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用，本文运用了重要句型和短语有：I can also use the Wi﹣fi to keep in touch with my parents．/ I'm really looking forward to this tour!/ communicate with … in English等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
The Green family
•an old couple
no children
two dogs
•a flat， in the centre of London
•wi﹣fi
•350pounds
The Black family
•a middle﹣aged couple
a junior school boy
a primary school girl
•a house， a little far from London
•a garden
•230pounds
要求：1．所写内容必须包括某一家的所有信息及你选择的理由；
2．结合自身情况提出1﹣2点游学活动的建议；
3．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息．
Dear Sir/ Madam，
I have read the information about the two families． And I have decided to live in
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Many thanks，
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir，
I have read the information about the two families． I have decided to live in the Green family． The old couple have no children but two dogs，so they will have more time to communicate with me in English and I can play with their pets as well．Their flat is in the centre of London ，so it's easy for me to go around．I can also use the Wi﹣fi to keep in touch with my parents． My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds．
I also have good ideas for the study tour．I love history ，so I wonder if we can visit the British Museum during the stay．I'm curious about British food as well，so if you can take us to have a taste， that will be very wonderful．（建议）
I'm really looking forward to this tour!
Many thanks，
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。假如你是李华，将参加今年暑期的英国伦敦游学（study tour）活动，英方提供了两个家庭供你选择居住，并征询你对游学活动的建议。请阅读以下信息，写一封电子邮件回复。仔细阅读材料和要求提示。这些提示要点构成写作的基本框架。动笔前要认真阅读，不要遗漏要点提示，并适当发挥。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，提纲包括所有提示要点。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用，本文运用了重要句型和短语有：I can also use the Wi﹣fi to keep in touch with my parents．/ I'm really looking forward to this tour!/ communicate with … in English等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
