46. 假定你是李华,学校英语社社长。请你在校宣传栏上写一则通知,请大家观看英语社宣传短片, 内容包括:

第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
46. 假定你是李华,学校英语社社长。请你在校宣传栏上写一则通知,请大家观看英语社宣传短片, 内容包括:
1. 短片内容;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎大家加入英语社。
注意:词数80左右;
可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案】Notice
In order to have a better understanding of our English club, an outstanding short movie about it will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.
Here are some relevant details about the movie. To begin with, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What's more, we expect all of you enjoy the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
Please do not be late and everybody of you will be welcome to take part in our English club.
解析
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一则通知,请大家观看英语社宣传短片。
详解】1.词汇积累
优秀的:outstanding→excellent
有关的:relevant→ connected
并且:what’s more→ besides
参加:take part in→ participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:What's more, we expect all of you enjoy the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
拓展句:What's more, we expect all of you enjoy the movie, after which you could have a heated discussion and give your own comments.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to have a better understanding of our English club, an outstanding short movie about it will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. (运用了不定式短语作目的状语)
[高分句型2] What's more, we expect all of you enjoy the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.  (运用了现在分词作状语)
 
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