I have received and read your letter, in which you mention that you wanted to lose weight by diet.

五、短文改错(共10个小题,每小题1分,共10分。)
66.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have received and read your letter, in which you mention that you wanted to lose weight by diet.
It is only naturally that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, healthy is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is second. So do not let others’ opinions to affect your normal life. Therefore, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is how you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with our studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.
I hope my advices will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to your next letter.
66.1. mention变mentioned    2.by后diet变dieting    3. naturally变natural
4. opinion后的 healthy变health     5. second前加the    6.去掉 affect前的to
7. Therefore变However    8. how变that    9. our变your            10. advices变 advice

 
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