书面表达(九)
无论在家里还是在学校里刘杨总有许多规则要遵守,他很苦恼。于是,他就写信给他的好朋友Jack,倾诉他内心的不快。请你根据汉语提示制定出他的规则,然后帮他写信给Jack。词数不少于80词。
1)6:30起床 2)在校穿校服 3)上课不准迟到
4)上课时不能戴帽子 5)在家不能看电视,每晚练习弹钢琴
6)9:00上床睡觉 7)周末打扫房间,洗衣服
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Liu Yang
范文:
Dear Jack,
I'm not happy every day. I have too__many① rules at school and home. I have to get up at 6:30 in the morning. I have to wear a uniform at school. I can't arrive late for class. I can't wear a hat in class, either②. At home I can't watch TV. I have to practice playing the piano every evening. I have to go to bed at 9:00.On the weekend I have to clean my room and wash my clothes. I never③ have fun every day. What can I do?
Yours,
Liu Yang
点评:①处使用了too many,用词非常准确。②处either用在否定句的句尾,显示了作者驾驭文字的能力。③处使用never表示否定,句式简洁,并且活用了课本。文章用简洁的语言,准确灵活的句式,准确地写出了题目的要求。Liu Yang