请以“My favorite animal”为题写一写你身边的动物,100词左右。要包含以下内容及要点: 1)你喜欢什么动物 2)你为什么喜欢它

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请以“My favorite animal”为题写一写你身边的动物,100词左右。要包含以下内容及要点:
1)你喜欢什么动物 2)你为什么喜欢它
3)它有什么特点   4)它来自哪里
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My favorite animal
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My favorite animal
There are many animals in the world. But__what's__my__favorite__animal,__do__you_
_know? Many people like her very much. I also like her. She is from China. She looks kind__of lazy but very cute. She is our friend. She likes to eat bamboos. She is very friendly to people. She is black and white. She has two black ears and eyes. And she also has__black__legs__and__arms.
Now__do__you__know__what__the__animal__is?__Yes,__she__is__a__panda. I like her because she is a symbol of friendship(友谊). And I tell my classmates that my favorite animal is a clever and very beautiful panda.
点评:①处设置悬念,吸引了读者的注意力。②处灵活运用了本单元的词汇来描述动物,做到了活学活用。③处对动物的描写细致到位。④处用设问方式给出答案,增强了句式的表达力度。
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