书面表达(十一)

现在是晚上7：00，小明和他的妹妹、爸爸妈妈、爷爷奶奶分别做着不同的事情。请根据图片内容写一篇70词左右的短文对这家人的活动做一介绍。

要求：①要用第三人称向大家介绍小明一家的活动，时态应用现在进行时。②书写规范，语句通顺，可以适当调整顺序，增加一些内容。
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范文：
It's seven o'clock in the evening now. What are Xiaoming's family doing at home?① Xiaoming is doing his homework. His younger sister is watching TV and his father is sending an email. Is his mother cooking supper now?② Yes, she is. She is good at cooking. His grandma is cleaning the room and his grandpa is reading a book. Everyone has his or her things to do and they are having fun.③
点评：本文运用“4W1H法”描述事件，结构合理、语言通顺、叙事条理。文中涉及了时间、地点、人物、事件及感受。
添彩点：①用一个问句来引起下文，设置了悬念；
②一般疑问句的使用使文章句式富于变化；
③用一个并列句总结全文，丰富了文章的表达；句中的have fun是一个点睛之笔，把整个家庭中欢乐的氛围恰到好处地表现了出来。