Dear Zhou Lu, I'm writing a letter ask you for some help. As you know,Zhang Fei and I used to b

Ⅶ.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Zhou Lu,
I'm writing a letter ask you for some help.
As you know,Zhang Fei and I used to be good friend. However,on one day,Zhang Fei read my private letter in secret and tell others what was written on it. Knowing this,I was extreme angry. I told her I would not be his friend any more. Hearing what I said,Zhang felt very surprised and no longer stayed with me. Facing with this,I felt very upset. I am much angry with her improper behaviour,but I can't forget the wonderful time that I stayed with her.I wonder whether I should forgive her. And I'm afraid if I offer to make friends with her,she will refuse me.How should I do?
Your friend,
Li Hua
 

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