7.【2018年山东省威海市】 “照镜子”是生活中的平常事,以生活为镜,可以照出现实中真实的自己。

7.2018年山东省威海市 “照镜子”是生活中的平常事,以生活为镜,可以照出现实中真实的自己。请以“Me in the mirror”为题,写一篇80词以上的英语短文。围绕自己最突出的一至两个优点和缺点,
重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我,成长为更好的自己。
要求:1.题目已给出,不计入总词数;
2.观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅;
3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
答案】Me in the mirror
Looking at myself in the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and I'm always ready to help them. So I'm very popular in my school. But I have a big problem, I'm less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class. In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed.
When I go to senior high school I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends. I hope we can help each other and learn from each other. I will make a good study resolution and try my best to go for it. I decide to have a healthier lifestyle. I'll spend more time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. What's more, I will read more books and master good leaning methods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me.

学【高分句型一】
I'm less interested in my lessons and I can’ t concentrate in class. 我对功课不太感兴趣,上课也不能集中精力。be interested in短语的使用,使文章增色不少。
【高分句型二】
In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed. 业余时间,我花太多的时间在电脑游戏上,所以我没有取得好成绩,这使我的父母很失望。which make my parents disappointed. 是由which引导的定语从句。
【高分句型三】
I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. 我将集中精力在课堂上,认真完成我的学习任务。说明作者在后来认识到了错误,而努力学习。
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