Ⅶ.书面表达 (A)根据要求完成读后续写,并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。 71.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的语篇。

(十一)【2020 •锦州市】
Ⅶ.书面表达
(A)根据要求完成读后续写,并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
71.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的语篇。
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为40-50词;
2.必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语;
3.续写至少一段,第一段开头语已经为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。
Because of COVID-19 (新冠病毒), students had to study online at home for a long time. Compared with studying at school, it’s very different.
Some students like online classes, because they have more freedom. They can get information about their study on the Internet. And they can also ask their teachers questions by Internet, telephone or email. During every break, they can watch TV or listen to music to relax.
Paragraph 1:
However, some students prefer studying at school. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作思路
本题属于材料作文,题目的开头已给出。要求根据短文中所给情节续写短文,要求至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语,且将所选词语加下划线。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
参考范文
However, some students prefer studying at school. In class, they can listen to teachers more carefully. Teachers can check their homework and help them in time. They can communicate with their teachers and classmates face to face. School is also good fun. After class, students can play together and enjoy themselves in different sports teams as well.

【名师点评】
例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,与所给短文内容衔接自然,并用了原文中划线的多个关键词。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
高分亮点:
单词和短语:prefer doing sth.;carefully;in time;communicate with;face to face;enjoy oneself;as well。
句型:Teachers can check their homework and help them in time. (and连接并列谓语结构)
School is also good fun.(不可数名词fun作表语)
 
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