（十二）【2020 •枣庄市】
47.Write a passage about an event that's the most unforgettable for you during your junior high school. (写一件在三年的初中生活中你最难忘的事情。)
(请根据下面的提示，在答题卡第六节下面，写出一篇90-120词的短文。注意：不要出现自己信息：诸如姓名，学校，人名可以用英文名字。)
1. The title of your story. (你的故事的标题。)
2. First write about the event(when and where it happened and who).
(首先写关于事件的时间、地点、相关人物等。)
3. Next write about how it happened.
(接下来写事件是如何发生的。)
4. Then write about how you feel about this event.
(然后写一下你的感受。)
5. At last write about how this event has changed your life or what you learn from it.
(最后写一下这件事如何改变你人生或者你从中学到什么。)
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【写作思路】
这个题目要求学生们写写三年的初中生活中最难忘的事情。题目中列出了写作的提纲，学生们可以根据这一提示，组织文章的结构和内容。首先要有一个标题；然后详细叙述这件事情发生的经过；接下来介绍一下自己的感受；最后写一下这件事如何改变你的人生或者你从中学到什么。虽然有步骤和结构的提示，但具体的内容还需要学生们发挥想象力，结合自己的实际生活去叙述。注意所选的事情要有代表性，能从中有收获。短文应以一般过去时态为主。
【参考范文】
Giving is better than taking
I'll never forget the day when my mom took me to the children's home. When I was in Grade 8, I was not satisfied with what I had. My mom knew all about my problem. One Sunny morning, she took me to the children's home. When I got there, I couldn't believe what I saw. There were some poor kids. Some were disabled. Others wore ugly clothes without toys. I gave away my beautiful clothes, toys and books to them. I felt I was happy and lucky enough to live in a family full of love. I knew happiness is giving not taking.
Sample 2:
The black boots
When I was in Grade 7, I studied in town with my aunt's family. It rained a lot that autumn. My shoes were all wet when I walked to school. I complained about the weather and wore the wet shoes all day. One rainy day, I got home from school, my aunt said, "Jim, your uncle bought you black boots. Come and have a try." I was very thankful. I didn't think I could get boots. My aunt and uncle didn't have them, neither did my cousins. I would never forget how my cousins admired me. More than two years has gong by, the black boots are always in my memory.
【名师点评】
例文点评：两篇习作都非常优秀。首先是内容完整，叙述有条理。选取事例有代表性，能引起读者的共鸣，从中得到一些启示或体会到真情实感。其次短文都使用了正确的时态，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式多变，有节奏感。表达流畅，意思连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：be satisfied with；give away；full of；complain about；have a try；more than。
句型：When引导时间状语从句；what引导宾语从句；how引导宾语从句；There be句型；动词不定式作结果状语；倒装结构。
47.Write a passage about an event that's the most unforgettable for you during your junior high school. (写一件在三年的初中生活中你最难忘的事情。)
(请根据下面的提示，在答题卡第六节下面，写出一篇90-120词的短文。注意：不要出现自己信息：诸如姓名，学校，人名可以用英文名字。)
1. The title of your story. (你的故事的标题。)
2. First write about the event(when and where it happened and who).
(首先写关于事件的时间、地点、相关人物等。)
3. Next write about how it happened.
(接下来写事件是如何发生的。)
4. Then write about how you feel about this event.
(然后写一下你的感受。)
5. At last write about how this event has changed your life or what you learn from it.
(最后写一下这件事如何改变你人生或者你从中学到什么。)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这个题目要求学生们写写三年的初中生活中最难忘的事情。题目中列出了写作的提纲，学生们可以根据这一提示，组织文章的结构和内容。首先要有一个标题；然后详细叙述这件事情发生的经过；接下来介绍一下自己的感受；最后写一下这件事如何改变你的人生或者你从中学到什么。虽然有步骤和结构的提示，但具体的内容还需要学生们发挥想象力，结合自己的实际生活去叙述。注意所选的事情要有代表性，能从中有收获。短文应以一般过去时态为主。
【参考范文】
Giving is better than taking
I'll never forget the day when my mom took me to the children's home. When I was in Grade 8, I was not satisfied with what I had. My mom knew all about my problem. One Sunny morning, she took me to the children's home. When I got there, I couldn't believe what I saw. There were some poor kids. Some were disabled. Others wore ugly clothes without toys. I gave away my beautiful clothes, toys and books to them. I felt I was happy and lucky enough to live in a family full of love. I knew happiness is giving not taking.
Sample 2:
The black boots
When I was in Grade 7, I studied in town with my aunt's family. It rained a lot that autumn. My shoes were all wet when I walked to school. I complained about the weather and wore the wet shoes all day. One rainy day, I got home from school, my aunt said, "Jim, your uncle bought you black boots. Come and have a try." I was very thankful. I didn't think I could get boots. My aunt and uncle didn't have them, neither did my cousins. I would never forget how my cousins admired me. More than two years has gong by, the black boots are always in my memory.
【名师点评】
例文点评：两篇习作都非常优秀。首先是内容完整，叙述有条理。选取事例有代表性，能引起读者的共鸣，从中得到一些启示或体会到真情实感。其次短文都使用了正确的时态，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式多变，有节奏感。表达流畅，意思连贯。
高分亮点：
短语：be satisfied with；give away；full of；complain about；have a try；more than。
句型：When引导时间状语从句；what引导宾语从句；how引导宾语从句；There be句型；动词不定式作结果状语；倒装结构。
