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Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China，Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China. With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food.
I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.
As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.
Guangzhou is waiting for you.
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这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含来了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍：第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色，简单的几句话包含了大量的信息；第二段是主体段，主要给读者推荐了一个好去处，并阐述了自己的理由；第三段和第四段是一个结尾，对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰，叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句与复合句结合，使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Located in the south of China，Guangzhou，with a history of more than two thousand years，plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China、I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot.、Last but not least. you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.、As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.等等。
