（二十九）【2019 •湖北省黄石市】
假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给Tom回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。
内容包括：1. 读几本好书；
2. 参加社会实践活动；
3. 帮父母做家务；
4. 和朋友一起锻炼；
5. 邀请Tom。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息；
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词忙：有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品classic literature works
社会实践活动social practice activities
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文，写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.
How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给Tom回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。
内容包括：1. 读几本好书；
2. 参加社会实践活动；
3. 帮父母做家务；
4. 和朋友一起锻炼；
5. 邀请Tom。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息；
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词忙：有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品classic literature works
社会实践活动social practice activities
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文，写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.
How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】Li Hua
这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
