3．（2018·江苏省中考真题）
书面表达
“南通市安全教育平台”让广大中小学生学到了很多安全知识。假如你是Jack，你的英国朋友Simon想了解平台的相关内容，请你根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文，从提供的六个类别里选择两个，跟 Simon谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施，并分享你的体会。
提示词汇：accidental injuries意外伤害 treasure珍爱 vt．
注意：1．短文中应包含所要求的信息，可以适当发挥。
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．短文中中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Simon，
Safety is very important．Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety．A website called nantong. sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety．On the website，I have learned a lot．
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【答案】Dear Simon，
Safety is very important．Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety．A website called nantong.sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety．On the website，I have learned a lot．
Food safety is the most common problem with us students．We should stay away from fast food．Perhaps fast food is delicious，but it’s bad for our health．Some dishes and food may be expired and you shouldn't eat them the next day，especially the dishes and food that were put into the fridge the night before．I once ate the dishes in the fridge．The next day，when I got to school，I had a stomachache．At least you should heat it enough before you eat them．Next，the traffic safety is also a big problem．It's necessary for us to obey the traffic rules，especially when we’re on the way to school or back home．Pay more attention to the traffic lights．Don't cross the road when the light is red．We should always go on the right side．Don't ride bikes side by side．
All in all，we must realize the danger around us and treasure our lives．Safety is always the first priority．
Yours
Jack
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，跟我的英国朋友Simon谈谈安全的类别以及相应的保护自身安全的措施，并分享我的体会。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Food safety is……，We should…….，when I got to……，we must……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了安全很重要，有一个网站帮助我们知道很多安全知识；接下来介绍安全的类别以及相应的保护自身安全的措施，最后指出我的体会。此处stay away from, be bad for, put into, at least, pay attention to, all in all等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
书面表达
“南通市安全教育平台”让广大中小学生学到了很多安全知识。假如你是Jack，你的英国朋友Simon想了解平台的相关内容，请你根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文，从提供的六个类别里选择两个，跟 Simon谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施，并分享你的体会。
| Contents （内容） |
Categories（类别） | |
| fire safety | food safety | |
| traffic safety | Internet safety | |
| natural disasters | accidental injuries | |
| Solutions（措施） | ……（请按你自选的两类内容分别写两点） | |
| Understanding（体会） | treasure life；…（请写1～2点） | |
提示词汇：accidental injuries意外伤害 treasure珍爱 vt．
注意：1．短文中应包含所要求的信息，可以适当发挥。
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．短文中中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Simon，
Safety is very important．Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety．A website called nantong. sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety．On the website，I have learned a lot．
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Simon，
Safety is very important．Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety．A website called nantong.sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety．On the website，I have learned a lot．
Food safety is the most common problem with us students．We should stay away from fast food．Perhaps fast food is delicious，but it’s bad for our health．Some dishes and food may be expired and you shouldn't eat them the next day，especially the dishes and food that were put into the fridge the night before．I once ate the dishes in the fridge．The next day，when I got to school，I had a stomachache．At least you should heat it enough before you eat them．Next，the traffic safety is also a big problem．It's necessary for us to obey the traffic rules，especially when we’re on the way to school or back home．Pay more attention to the traffic lights．Don't cross the road when the light is red．We should always go on the right side．Don't ride bikes side by side．
All in all，we must realize the danger around us and treasure our lives．Safety is always the first priority．
Yours
Jack
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，跟我的英国朋友Simon谈谈安全的类别以及相应的保护自身安全的措施，并分享我的体会。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Food safety is……，We should…….，when I got to……，we must……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了安全很重要，有一个网站帮助我们知道很多安全知识；接下来介绍安全的类别以及相应的保护自身安全的措施，最后指出我的体会。此处stay away from, be bad for, put into, at least, pay attention to, all in all等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
